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| *Druss |
 31st August 2009 - 10:29 AM
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 A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: 31st Aug 2009 From: Lille - France Member No: 55 |
I definitly need advices on this one. http://d1.e-loader.net/eUCdqq7eHT.jpg So here is the three first letters ' A - L & I '. |
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| *.Saticmotion |
31st August 2009 - 10:39 AM
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Out The Shell Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: 30th Aug 2009 From: Member No: 47 |
Ouch that can be a very great piece mate! Stay tuned in with the vector things, it will be fine, maybe a bit larger canvas will do.. --- Design Your Own Way Tags | LPs | Gifts | Photos | Website | Portfolio .Saticmotion -, h, i -, 1. awesome, perfection 2. the future, lets design |
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| *viremaster |
31st August 2009 - 01:58 PM
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 A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 9 Joined: 9th Aug 2009 From: Bladel, Noord-Brabant, the Netherlands Member No: 21 |
looks great so far, i think the hardest part in this one will be ot make all the letters look like the belong to eachotter good luck man  --- www.sanderstaal.tk |
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| *Interplus |
31st August 2009 - 03:58 PM
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 Out The Shell Group: Member Posts: 11 Joined: 27th Jul 2009 From: Mexico Member No: 4 |
Looks great so far, keep working |
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| *Druss |
31st August 2009 - 04:06 PM
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A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: 31st Aug 2009 From: Lille - France Member No: 55 |
Thank you for the comments ! A little bit more advanced : http://d12.e-loader.net/l7Xh5yWu7w.png It's better like that I think 
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| `dotSilver |
31st August 2009 - 05:08 PM
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 DF Godfather Group: Administrator Posts: 280 Joined: 4th Jul 2009 From: Oxfordshire - UK Member No: 1 |
Looking great so far. The second one is better when you connected everything together, you should carry on doing that and just keep on making people, oil, slime and monsters. This could turn into an amazing piece of work once finished. Good luck. ---  DigitalFlow Webmaster |
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| *arkangel |
1st September 2009 - 03:45 AM
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 Average Joe Group: Member Posts: 37 Joined: 31st Aug 2009 From: albany, new york, usa Member No: 51 |
yea i agree with the rest of the peoples. its a great start..as for the "v" and "e", i'd try something similar to what you did with the "a" and "L"..where the "e" is some sort of distorted face with the "v" coming out/off of it.. also i'd make the canvas bigger still and move the letters off of the bottom and put them in the middle so their floating rather than tied down to the bottom..just a few opinions that floated into my head as i first looked at it..can't wait for the finished piece. --- 
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| ^Fares |
3rd September 2009 - 02:10 PM
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Average Joe Group: Artist Posts: 38 Joined: 8th Aug 2009 From: Jerusalem,IL Member No: 15 |
Its a great start,however get rid of the swirls part on the right,and add more details that are connected and doesn't kill the composition. |
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| *Druss |
16th September 2009 - 11:39 AM
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A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 10 Joined: 31st Aug 2009 From: Lille - France Member No: 55 |
New step : http://d15.e-loader.net/JmRaM45rXB.jpg I'm really not sure about the 'V'. I think it contains too much details so that we are focused on it whereas the other letters. And the V is also lighter and not connected to the others. What do you think guys ? |
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