| digitalflow > Artist Suggestions > Suggestion Yourself > Leon | |
| ^encoretheangel |
 18th April 2010 - 12:44 AM
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 A Quiet One Group: Artist Posts: 89 Joined: 18th Jan 2010 From: Indonesia Member No: 211 |
Quote: DiegoDP I think this piece has too much editions, in my opinion you should start another one. agreed with Diego, I think you should make the another one  --- Complicated Minimalism™ |
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| ^Sos-k |
18th April 2010 - 02:15 PM
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 Kungfu Panda Group: Artist Posts: 85 Joined: 14th Sep 2009 From: North Carolina, USA Member No: 87 |
I dunno about everyone else but I'm a yes. --- deviantART |
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| *Leon |
18th April 2010 - 09:49 PM
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 A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 18 Joined: 30th Aug 2009 From: The Netherlands Member No: 43 |
Ok, I'm working on another one which you guys might like more (at least I hope lol :P) Here is the sample, it's A2 sized thats why the details are so huge 
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| ^encoretheangel |
19th April 2010 - 07:18 AM
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A Quiet One Group: Artist Posts: 89 Joined: 18th Jan 2010 From: Indonesia Member No: 211 |
really really great work! the details you made are really impressive! the colors are really lovely! this is really better than your piece before, but the typo I think you should make it looks like "typo" (not the name btw, just the typo... it's okay if you want to use Leon as you word) maybe these can be a references/inspiration typo for you : http://www.behance.net/KRFX1 http://www.behance.net/playful http://www.behance.net/almacen http://www.behance.net/Kliment and also the bird, I think you should remove that... if you do those, I will vote yes  good luck mate! --- Complicated Minimalism™ |
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| *Leon |
19th April 2010 - 09:33 AM
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A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 18 Joined: 30th Aug 2009 From: The Netherlands Member No: 43 |
Thanks for the feedback, I will definitely check those fonts out and will look into the bird, might make it smaller or like you said remove it  Btw the font is just simple Arial, but edited with the warp tools etc in illustrator. Thanks again. |
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| *Leon |
27th April 2010 - 03:10 PM
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A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 18 Joined: 30th Aug 2009 From: The Netherlands Member No: 43 |
Ok I've been working on the first piece again and feel for the first time that it's actually finished. About the second piece, its a promotional piece and I only showed you guys to let you see what I'm capable of but since it's a promotional piece I'm not going to show any further process in it (sorry for that but you will be able to see it when my portfolio goes online).  Thanks! |
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| ^jdeniz |
30th April 2010 - 12:59 AM
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 A Quiet One Group: Artist Posts: 78 Joined: 4th Apr 2010 From: The Netherlands Member No: 284 |
About the typography piece: the font isn't nice and the composition is a bit weird (it's floating there, would be better if you do it more against the mountains). The effect isn't that special or unique and can be done in 5 min... I would remove the black and do a nice funky colour instead of it so that it would look less depressing. It looks not done yet. The first promotional piece you're working on .. I really don't know what to think of it to be very honest. Nor do you follow our advice a lot (which you should at least consider because we're here to help you and feedback is ALWAYS good if it's good or if it's bad. It will only make you better. Besides, we're the artists here...) I would remove the violin because it's a bit weird to paste it there when she's naked/ Or make it bigger or do the stock more down. The text + ! looks painted in a rush, could be smoother and smaller. Also the whole piece has no depth in it. If you would do some depth in it, it would improve the piece a lot. Last but not least: everything just looks not organised.. A pattern here, a spatter there... I think you should wait a couple of months. Keep making art. Follow our advice and maybe then you could try again to suggest yourself/apply. But since it's a suggested-yourself-thread, I would say no. You're not ready yet in my eyes. --- http://jdeniz.deviantart.com Portfolio site: http://www.breakingcanvas.com |
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| `DG |
30th April 2010 - 01:37 PM
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 DF Godson Group: Administrator Posts: 895 Joined: 27th Jul 2009 From: Chislehurst, UK Member No: 6 |
Quote: jdeniz About the typography piece: the font isn't nice and the composition is a bit weird (it's floating there, would be better if you do it more against the mountains). The effect isn't that special or unique and can be done in 5 min... I would remove the black and do a nice funky colour instead of it so that it would look less depressing. It looks not done yet. The first promotional piece you're working on .. I really don't know what to think of it to be very honest. Nor do you follow our advice a lot (which you should at least consider because we're here to help you and feedback is ALWAYS good if it's good or if it's bad. It will only make you better. Besides, we're the artists here...) I would remove the violin because it's a bit weird to paste it there when she's naked/ Or make it bigger or do the stock more down. The text + ! looks painted in a rush, could be smoother and smaller. Also the whole piece has no depth in it. If you would do some depth in it, it would improve the piece a lot. Last but not least: everything just looks not organised.. A pattern here, a spatter there... I think you should wait a couple of months. Keep making art. Follow our advice and maybe then you could try again to suggest yourself/apply. But since it's a suggested-yourself-thread, I would say no. You're not ready yet in my eyes. +1 --- Founder of DF Online Portfolio |
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| *Leon |
30th April 2010 - 07:31 PM
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A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 18 Joined: 30th Aug 2009 From: The Netherlands Member No: 43 |
Quote: jdeniz About the typography piece: the font isn't nice and the composition is a bit weird (it's floating there, would be better if you do it more against the mountains). The effect isn't that special or unique and can be done in 5 min... I would remove the black and do a nice funky colour instead of it so that it would look less depressing. It looks not done yet. The first promotional piece you're working on .. I really don't know what to think of it to be very honest. Nor do you follow our advice a lot (which you should at least consider because we're here to help you and feedback is ALWAYS good if it's good or if it's bad. It will only make you better. Besides, we're the artists here...) I would remove the violin because it's a bit weird to paste it there when she's naked/ Or make it bigger or do the stock more down. The text + ! looks painted in a rush, could be smoother and smaller. Also the whole piece has no depth in it. If you would do some depth in it, it would improve the piece a lot. Last but not least: everything just looks not organised.. A pattern here, a spatter there... I think you should wait a couple of months. Keep making art. Follow our advice and maybe then you could try again to suggest yourself/apply. But since it's a suggested-yourself-thread, I would say no. You're not ready yet in my eyes. What I make of this is just that you don't like my art, you can't compare your art to mine. Instead you should look at my skills. Anyway thanks a lot for the consideration. |
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| `DG |
30th April 2010 - 08:41 PM
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DF Godson Group: Administrator Posts: 895 Joined: 27th Jul 2009 From: Chislehurst, UK Member No: 6 |
Her main intentions were to only point out what you should improve, what was working, what was not. That was all our intentions, not to offend you and put down your work. This type of criticism she's given you is quite less than you would expect for people working for the art packs in any other art groups. Every great Artist went through harsh criticism to get to where they are and that was our goal, to point out the bad and encourage the good. Keep doing what you love anyway. Good luck. --- Founder of DF Online Portfolio |
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| ^jdeniz |
30th April 2010 - 10:34 PM
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A Quiet One Group: Artist Posts: 78 Joined: 4th Apr 2010 From: The Netherlands Member No: 284 |
Yes.. It only shows that you cannot handle critique at all :/ --- http://jdeniz.deviantart.com Portfolio site: http://www.breakingcanvas.com |
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