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 28th July 2010 - 09:44 AM
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 A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: 28th Jul 2010 From: Member No: 382 |
Hi there! I want to share my portfolio with you guys! Please give me some feedback     
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| ^Roxy |
28th July 2010 - 04:51 PM
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 A Quiet One Group: Artist Posts: 27 Joined: 22nd Jul 2010 From: Member No: 376 |
the bottom one reminds me of Sawyer. I like the top one also Good stuff! |
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| `DG |
28th July 2010 - 10:25 PM
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 DF Godson Group: Administrator Posts: 895 Joined: 27th Jul 2009 From: Chislehurst, UK Member No: 6 |
Hey, you have some good and interesting pieces. Would like to say, your "Graphic Design" piece is pretty cool and geniusly done.. very simple but very effective. You seem to have a variety of styles to your works.. it's good, BUT, it'd be best to specialize in one specific style and develop it more.. Either photo manipulation pieces or something like the graphic design piece..or vector.. I started off with photo manipulation, then over the years, developed a couple of styles and has evolved into vector-abstract pieces. For you Kan Ye piece, it looks pretty cool with the effect to his legs however, it doesn't stat a message or talk about itself because it has probably no concept or the concept isn't being illustrated properly.. you've got a great background which fits in properly but the pre-made cracks is a baaaad idea and makes you work look unprofessional. *never use pre-made brushes* so yeah, take out the cracks, put in a shadow instead.. don't give it a shadow where u see his outlines.. use a blurry shadow on the floor to get some depth.. then... work on your concept, try not to just place things behind the subject just for the sake of it.. i used to do that and looking back, it's very uncool. keep it up.. you have a great portfolio so far. --- Founder of DF Online Portfolio |
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| *artcream |
29th July 2010 - 06:53 AM
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A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: 28th Jul 2010 From: Member No: 382 |
Thanks for the feedback, finally someone is taking time to give a good comment You are right about my style. I'm still developing it. On this moment i'm in an experimental phase The problem is i like photo manipulation AND the piece like graphic design, so it's hard to make a decision... About the Kanye piece you're absolutely right. The piece doesn't have any message, and my concept was experimenting with other techniques. I saw yesterday that the "triangle" is coming back in al my pieces.. The pre-made cracks was a texture, but now i see it, it looks bad. I think i will follow your advice and put in a nice shadow.. Thanks again for the nice feedback!! |
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| `DG |
29th July 2010 - 09:37 AM
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DF Godson Group: Administrator Posts: 895 Joined: 27th Jul 2009 From: Chislehurst, UK Member No: 6 |
welcome buddy. --- Founder of DF Online Portfolio |
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