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| *maxzon |
 1st September 2010 - 07:23 PM
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 A Quiet One Group: Member Posts: 4 Joined: 16th Jul 2010 From: Heemskerk, The Netherlands Member No: 374 |
 I'd love to hear your thoughts about this piece. It's finished for like 30/40% yet, so still much to do! Share some advice!  ---     
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| `DG |
1st September 2010 - 09:44 PM
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 DF Godson Group: Administrator Posts: 895 Joined: 27th Jul 2009 From: Chislehurst, UK Member No: 6 |
you've chosen a good background but your cracks on the floor is very wrong in perspective and doesn't look good. best to take it out... and take out the bird, tree and hot air balloon as they are very wrong in perspective and don't relate to the subject. also, what's your concept? --- Founder of DF Online Portfolio |
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